Saturday, 7 September 2013
Creative Writing
I was born with a genetic mutation. It really influenced my life knowing that I am one of a kind. I am in this state because as a child, my mother ate an abundance of rabbits while she was pregnant with me. She had this really weird craving at that time. Before hand, the rabbits consumed some sort of chemical. After my birth, my mother realized my hearing was unnaturally strong, and my ears were freakishly big and strangely shaped.As I grew up I accepted my differences. My rabbit ears helped hear from far distances and hear through walls. It was amazing! But I got into a lot of trouble for ease dropping. Along with my ears I have red eyes. I rarely minded because it didn't bother me at all. I was bullied for awhile but it didn't bother me because I was growing to like who I've become. The thing that affected me the most was the fact that I have four fingers and I didn't have opposable thumbs like all the other kids at my school. I have to admit it was harder for me to pick things up,thus I need to use both of my hands in order to my everyday needs. Also all the teasing was a hard thing to let go but I managed to come through and look at the bright side. I honestly love who I am as a person and I wouldn't change anything because I think of myself to be unique person with different abilities.Overall I knew I have to live with this mutation but I was okay with it.
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I love this! Which picture is it from? The one thing I would say is that you have created a great character intro... but now I want a story... a plot... a conflict... rising action and a solution (preferably one that involves your super rabbit powers). :)
ReplyDeleteIt's very interesting! I read it like twice! I love the bunny pic!
ReplyDeleteI am glad you liked it.
ReplyDeleteI really like the story but you should have a climax.
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ReplyDeleteI think you were very creative and like the picture of the bunny
ReplyDeleteYour story was very creative and unique.
ReplyDeleteIt was very creative and different! I love the bunny picture!
ReplyDeletegoodjob, try dding a climax to your story
ReplyDeletevery creative of you to write about mutants, loved how you used the picture at the end!
ReplyDeleteNice!!! haha super creative I liked it a lot.
ReplyDeletethankyou!
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