Monday, 21 October 2013

Act 1-Love

As a messenger of god, I believe the purest form of love is the love meant for god. However, concerning love between two people is another story. The thing with young people, is that they're feelings of 'love' may only be lust.
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  1. Unknown29 October 2013 at 15:32

    I don't know who your character is, so you should include her/him name

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  2. Unknown29 October 2013 at 19:09

    I also agree with the comment above, maybe you could write a bit more about your character's view on love:)

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  3. Unknown3 November 2013 at 13:49

    You wrote a very good paragrapgh about love but i think you should have included the names that u were writting about. :)

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